Update

I have know made massive changes with my Music Magazine by implementing the new ideas that were suggested to me. This has made my Magazine look better and a lot more professional and conventional. It has been good because the magazine has improved massively but also there are new features which has made the magazine look effective and stylish. This is good and the work I have done has been successful for my magazine.

But in the future I will be making some edits which will hopefully make my Music Magazine better. These are little things that will allow a wider audience to be attracted to the magazine. Firstly I need to add in two more images in my double page spread. This will give the audience more of a view of the star and also there is more there to attract people to read the magazine. Also I think that I need to add more text onto the Front Cover of the Music Magazine. This is because in my research I saw that there was a lot of information on the front cover. For example:

This Music Magazine from my research has a lot of different pieces of information on the front cover. I need to incorporate some more information to make my Music Magazine more conventional and fit for purpose.










Also I am going to add in more stories in my Content page. This is because when I looked back over my research I noticed that there were at least five stories. Such as:









This Mojo Magazine has five different stories as well as a cover story. This shows that I have to include one maybe two more stories to make my Music Magazine effective and conventional.








These are some improvements that I will be making too my Music Magazine. These will hopefully make my Music Magazine look better and more conventional.